Entrail_JI
Kinda random, but from all their interactions, why do I get the feeling that there was a conscious effort to prevent Emma from getting closer to Ren? NGL it makes me irritated TBH. I'm slowly getting the same feeling with Ava as well. It's like a feeling that these ships are being artificially blocked and it doesn't feel natural at all. Just my two cents. Carry on with the ships!
To be clear, I never said it was unnatural for a guy and a girl to not feel romantic interest in one another. The specific instances I mentioned earlier felt unnatural in how they were playing out, hence the comment. The author already confirmed my hunch in their reply, so there really isn't much else to be said here.
sylin:There’s nothing unnatural about there being no romantic interest between a guy and a girl. That’s how life works lol. Ren has never been described as outstandingly handsome, Emma has crushed on Kevin and he for the most part reciprocates it, Ava is introverted and they never really spend time together because they’re all busy with their own goals, etc. The reasons are more than few and they aren’t a far stretch away. All girls having feelings for the same guy would feel much more contrived.
I hate this development with a fiery passion. But I have already made my due with this novel. Good writing with forced plot developments and sometimes reads like a TNE. Sure, I'll allow it but frick this Everblood character to its untimely death. reee Now, take my golden ticket. You've lead me to read 340 chaps. So, you deserve it. 👏
In the first place, it didnt not even make any sense how the book got to Kevin, but it was understandable. But later, we see the demon faceoff against what seem to be the demonkimg in the dream. Then, we found out the book story is from the viewpoint of Ren. In all of that, there was no foreshadowing or hints, they just popped out of nowhere making it feel unnatural and inconsistent. And what's with Everblood? He had too many opportunities to kill Ren but just teases him.