Entrail_JI
Kinda random, but from all their interactions, why do I get the feeling that there was a conscious effort to prevent Emma from getting closer to Ren? NGL it makes me irritated TBH. I'm slowly getting the same feeling with Ava as well. It's like a feeling that these ships are being artificially blocked and it doesn't feel natural at all. Just my two cents. Carry on with the ships!
Whether you're aiming for multiple love interests or not, please try to make the blocks feel more natural as shameless harem lovers (like me) can somewhat sense when an author is deliberately trying to block a ship. It can be irritating to pick up on, regardless of the reason for doing so.
Entrail_JI:Cus im trying to avoid a all girls fall for MC scenario.
I hate this development with a fiery passion. But I have already made my due with this novel. Good writing with forced plot developments and sometimes reads like a TNE. Sure, I'll allow it but frick this Everblood character to its untimely death. reee Now, take my golden ticket. You've lead me to read 340 chaps. So, you deserve it. đ
In the first place, it didnt not even make any sense how the book got to Kevin, but it was understandable. But later, we see the demon faceoff against what seem to be the demonkimg in the dream. Then, we found out the book story is from the viewpoint of Ren. In all of that, there was no foreshadowing or hints, they just popped out of nowhere making it feel unnatural and inconsistent. And what's with Everblood? He had too many opportunities to kill Ren but just teases him.