Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

Hein, Ava, and the others: This wasn't in the contract.... 😭

Ren be like

Ren will come back Over power with an over power Caïssa to roll on the monolith and the union

Mo Jinhao be like:

Ahhhh Ren the goat

Ren out here like

Thanks for the chapter!!!

lemme jus hope that they dun fking give a time skip and just write the whole of his journey

i hope union gets also a warning

no chaps today?

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Okay, so I'm horrible at giving feedback but I will try and this is just my opinion. To me Ren's hysteria didn't feel like hysteria at all. It was kind of... I feel like I'm missing something. For example, how his eyes looked and the expression on his face. Maybe also the thoughts on his mind? Also, how about making Ava's and Hein's reaction a bit more dramatic by having them call Ren more that once to get him out of his hysteria? Don't know if anything I just said makes sense. Please, just don't be offended and don't hate me.

Guess he'll die....

this chapter made me feel 😌💅❤️💓😎✨🥺🤧💕💪👑😌😌

Thanks for the chapter!!

What time do you usually post chapters I know they're two chapters a day now but I don't know when they might come?

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Phew, chills literally chills