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100EyedArgus
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Yay! Thanks for the chap, that was intense! Screw Melissa, you better give Ren something that'll heal him! The boy's gonna be scolded by his mom. And I am actually amazed by Aerin's skill whatever it is for doing extremely well despite not sacrificing her body.

mavha
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I LOVE AMANDA X REN!!!!

Blasphemer_reader
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I really hope she doesn't leave Lock, I really wanna see more such moments 😁

NBV
NBVLv15NBV

If it isn't so late in the night right now I'd be so hyped that I might even squeal like a fan girl from this chapter.

NBV
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I think I just got diabetes from how the chapter ended.

Graeme_Georges
Graeme_GeorgesLv14Graeme_Georges

I love this so much I'm screaming

CommanderWall
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Amanda should realize her feelings for Ren by now.

JExtra
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I'm very curious as to how Melissa reacted watching his game. She must be aware that the goal she set for him was the reason that he pushed himself that far right?

Arkard
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It'll be nice if Amanda doesn't leave the Lock because she realizes now that she has someone else she cares for besides her father

WenchHunter
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alanuniq
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Quang_Ga
Quang_GaLv13Quang_Ga

i'm so high right now uoohhhhhhhhh

Zhoucini
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Im squealin liKe a girl rn

SORA_THE_SKY
SORA_THE_SKYLv3SORA_THE_SKY

watashi no kokoro ga itai .....

Enlightened_Rookie
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The flag has been raised full speed ahead Lad full Speed

System_Creator
System_CreatorLv13System_Creator

Thanks for the chapter! This chapter got me feeling some kinda way. Keep it up!

Loco
LocoLv4Loco

I'm not a fan of the Ren*Amanda ship but you manage to convey the feelings well. Nice work. On the other hand, you described the same scene 3 times (The Spectators, The Twins, and Ren), to say exactly the same thing, it's a bit redundant. Please don't turn it into a Chinese novel with artificial word quantities. Thanks for your work.

ApostleOfEpilogue
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Amanda X Ren

Gentelman
GentelmanLv4Gentelman

AMANDA X REN BEST COUPLE

Christiano_Fan
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Let's Go!!!!!!!!!

Lucifer_Dragneel
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Noice