Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

Imagine Melissa being the love interest XD

Love some character development, but please use Grammarly or something similar. I totally get it if English isn’t your first language and the grammar isn’t too bad, but better grammar and correct punctuations can help make it much smoother for the reader. Love the story, just trying to give some help.

I really hope Jin doesn't become an antagonist

Thanks for the chapters! We getting spoiled 😋 p.s love a good filler, just hope it's not too long

filler? I been craving interaction all this time. this ain't no filler for me but gonna fill my needs

character driven chaps for a bit sign me up cause thats what i prefer honestly

Thank you for this relaxing chapter author sama. I'm excited for the tournament arc or where the tyrants gets destroyed arc🤣. Anyway keep up the good work, I really liked the story.

Thanks for the chapter :)

yes daily life interactions will be nice

Melissa

Thx for the chapter

looking forward to character development <3

thanks for the chap

thanks a lot! and i dont mind these kinds of fillers :)))))

Thx

good

Prowriting helps.

“Then die”