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Dark_Eterium
Dark_EteriumLv3Dark_Eterium

Kakashi is proud

siniestracalceta
siniestracalcetaLv4siniestracalceta

lol, so many chapters for the plan for One boy of the three candidates the protagonist is going to put into his organization? i mean, it's interesting to see the MC being full of schemes, but, will everyone have So many plans and back ups to get them into the teem? or at least he could train a bit more while he "waits" with smallsnake, but i do hope the Main cast (of the original novel) can be shaken by all the mess the MC did lol, and thanks for the chapter!

Bob_Le_Builder
Bob_Le_BuilderLv1Bob_Le_Builder

First 2 day streak

Phantasma_
Phantasma_Lv14Phantasma_

The writing in these chapters are cool, but it is out of character. Character development doesn't explain how MC became a chess addict, why is he so good at the game, and now has a shadow boss mentality. I remember he was an overweight guy with no hope for the future and a webnovelist in the first chapters. How did he come to become this entirely different character? The only passable parts are his actions in the story if I assume it's all performed under monarchs indifference. Also, it would make sense that he is a chess maniac due to the influence of overusing his skill. However, there's no explanation at all. It's out of left field.

AnonymousDog
AnonymousDogLv4AnonymousDog

Thanks for the chapter !

No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

Tyvm

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

Rafael_Atienza
Rafael_AtienzaLv4Rafael_Atienza

Sasuga Ren-sama

Daoistg8BE9a
Daoistg8BE9aLv1Daoistg8BE9a

good

whalerider
whaleriderLv4whalerider

Thanks for the chapter 👍