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LavaFiend
LavaFiendLv10LavaFiend

BRuh yall need to shut it and just enjoy the novel. If you can complain you can stop reading its simple as that.

DaoistZg7ePC
DaoistZg7ePCLv2DaoistZg7ePC

UP UP UP

Arkage
ArkageLv15Arkage

Wait! How does he get out of the hole?

IQuoted
IQuotedLv5IQuoted

such as the mc that skips the travelling part i skipped this entire chapter cuz the conversation is just so predictable

Qw_Erty_2568
Qw_Erty_2568Lv2Qw_Erty_2568

exp

The_Old_One
The_Old_OneLv5The_Old_One

Kyoho
KyohoLv1Kyoho

Wow... That was cool.

Shirawashi
ShirawashiLv1Shirawashi

Phantasma_
Phantasma_Lv14Phantasma_

The ideas in this chapter are very good and the narrative has a warm feeling, but the writing is disconnected and weak. The protagonists words and thoughts are contradicting themselves constantly. Leaving this here for author-san if they choos to rewrite the early chapters.

SusshiRoll
SusshiRollLv15SusshiRoll

How did he do that? what? wasn't he the author?

TheDejan_5
TheDejan_5Lv1TheDejan_5

huuuuge respect for describing every detail, I could really imagine the scenery

Eduardox013
Eduardox013Lv11Eduardox013

La parte donde encuentra el alma y conversan fue muy predecible, aun asi no esta mal 😎👌... Continuemos para ver si se pone mejor 😕

Doflaminggo147
Doflaminggo147Lv5Doflaminggo147

Mmm meh

BuzzGrave
BuzzGraveLv15BuzzGrave

Thanks for the chapter ~

MugoxNR
MugoxNRLv5MugoxNR

perfect chapter

sanyuky
sanyukyLv5sanyuky

gracias por el cap

DaoistVFeg3i
DaoistVFeg3iLv1DaoistVFeg3i

Am I the only one who found it strange that the main character first says that Casey is just a spirit with no power and can only transmit information, and then he demonstrates power beyond the main character?

Mark_Tapan
Mark_TapanLv2Mark_Tapan

im cry

Brynnn2020
Brynnn2020Lv1Brynnn2020

MĂșsica de entrenamiento 😆😌

Normacat
NormacatLv1Normacat

Whoa, so many details

MiguelLezodyDiaz
MiguelLezodyDiazLv3MiguelLezodyDiaz

excuse me?