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DarkSeid
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I’m curious on what race your main character is. Is it human? Also, is it temporarily that he will stay as human or is it permanent?

NekoScribe
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Most likely not gonna bring other media into the story, at least not yet, im considering adding something to sort of balance a human to reach the same heights as saiyans though

DarkSeid:I don’t recommend you make your main character wish for Saiyan genetic to be part of him. It wouldn’t be original at all and if used in the right way then he would be way too over-powered. I recommend you should brIng other tv or anime related shows in it but to lesser extent if you want. For example, Viltrumite. At least, this isn’t truly too overpowered and exactly the same appearance as human. It also has weakness to sound. It can be challenge to Saiyan’s race to be honest. Also, I’m guessing your main character doesn’t know much about Viltrumite. It’ll be good challenge and curiosity to be satisfied if he try to figured out more of it’s ability. In this case, he wouldn’t truly know everything so it wouldn’t be boring for him. So I recommend Viltrumite to be honest. But that’s your choice to be honest.
Wolf_bro
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Thanks For the chapter. If I were to suggest anything the main character could have his own fighting squadron like the crusher corps consisting of people like dbs broly and Nail or maybe even a yardratian