Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: 'Master' of death
Harry Potter: 'Master' of death
Orezie_001
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moooooorrrrrreeee and James should know how much lily's sister hates her there is literally no reason for him to allow Harry to go there no matter what Dumbledore says. in the original story there was nobody to reject it but now there is someone who by all logic should and yet he doesn't
đ¤Śââď¸...now that you mentioned it I feel like writing this chapter again, that I won't be doing as we learn from our mistakes and anyways there is nothing that magic can't solve.. let's just assume that there was a little confundus in action while Dumbledore was pursuading James to send harry at dursleys? yeah let's definitely do that and I'll mention it in later chapter where Dumbledore will be monologueing about his plans about Harry.đ
For the moment a good start for me nice the thing of Gods and champions all that I really hope that Harry will not be diminished more than that the damaged drowning blow it's not cool already that the brother of the little goddess gave him a nasty blow with the capacities of rank 1 ... nerf plus a character already nerf it's average other than that very nice I hope a chapter exit rate more often waiting is frustrating
3 and half short chapters of nothing but the god and wishes part. and rest of chapters were a long extended out plot that could have been done in one chapter.. I mean the idea in story is great but all 7 chapters so far could have literally been done in 2 or 3 chapters... keep up good work thoe[img=recommend]
