athass_prkr
The thing is when a well written fic suddenly turns towards tragedy it's annoying for fanfic readers who were expecting a generic feel good fanfic. It just depends on you and your target audience I guess. I for one was looking for that and if it goes down again I might stop reading simply because it's not what I was searching for. It's nothing against you as an author đ
It's just i don't want to see Jasmine having heartbreak following tragedy and repeat; she deserves eternal retirement with all of her loved ones. The Atlantians, Mordred, Stheno & Euryale, Selene, Wanda etc.. Even if at the end of the story she passes her role as Death's avatar on to her successor and finally dies in peace, I at least want her to have a happy reunion with everyone in the afterlife, so that it will be impossible not to cry ones heart out.
The story you have written so far has been great and though I didn't didn't like the previous chapter, with how Jasmine seems to be in a tradegy again with possible breakaway from a possibly broken Wanda, the story is yours and not everything has to be liked just like I never liked how Rowling killed Dobby. This is going good and you should continue your story and I hope to see a good ending.
I Like the Story so far and found the last chapter pretty nice. I enjoy reading your story everday it's right now one of my favorits. I would say that you should Just continue Like you planned. Since I found the Story great till now and I'm sure that the next arc's that you planned are going to be just as great as the arc's that came before.Thanks for writing such a great story and i Hope that you're continue this story for a long time have a nice day p.s Sorry for my bad grammar