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Comments of chapter undefined of Unveiling Shadows

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Unveiling Shadows

Tasnime_7elb

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Lone_wolf_28
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what's with HER:THEN and HER:NOW... I'm kinda confused but I'll keep reading and I'll reread it to understand better...thank you for your time...I really loved the way u started off..it for me hooked...keep updating!!!!

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Tasnime_7elb
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Thank you so much for your honest feedback, and for the Her:then it's more of a way to let you know that the events happened in the past in the main character's pov, the same for her:now as if it's in the present. Thank you again for taking time to read my novel, it means so much!

2yr

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Lone_wolf_28
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And by the way, the riddle about death was awesome...I couldn't guess it..I was confused and the when the question as to if we guessed it came I got to know it was a riddle...that was good..

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Lone_wolf_28
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so far the chapters has me hooked...and it keeps me on edge...I love the way it makes me feel when I'm reading it ...i couldn't reply to the comment...it shows error so I'll just add it as a new comment..

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Lone_wolf_28
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I have a hunch...the FL had DID... dissociated indentity disorder...I'm not sure though..but I'm excited to continue reading...

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