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Comments of chapter undefined of In Naruto with the power of One Piece.

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apple_juice_6693
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abey over

Coolnerd
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tala tira vote dekhxas tes ma click gar

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Brokedepressed
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1You could create an original jutsu that mimics the power of devouring some mythical wolves have and have his ninken use it on enemies to become stronger. 2 Have him join a summoning beast group that would teach his pup how to become a pseudo tailed beast while he learns sage mode. 3 You could have him raid a laboratory (Kama,Orochimaru,that leach using shippuden movie doctor from the land of sky) 4 Have Danzo illegally add some of ghe Kyuubi’s chakra to his ninken and have that make it a pseudo tailed beast

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Silkerin
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I already thank you for not making it yet another Uchiha fic :D

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fatjesus1993
fatjesus1993Lv14fatjesus1993

Is he going to turn his ninken into the tailed beast or would you rather him not? Depending on an answer I may have some ideas.

EvilCompanion
EvilCompanionLv12EvilCompanion

any idea how do u want him to look like?

darkimortal
darkimortalLv6darkimortal

Ugh another lazy main character. I'm interested in reading this story, but lazy characters really just drag the story on they complain far too much for my liking. Nobody wants to read about Shikamaru as a main character. That's why the story is about the idiotic too much energy having Naruto, that's also why it's not about Sasuke, because nobody would truly like having these guys as main characters for the Long haul. They're cool for a small duration as side characters, but nobody wants to read or watch a lazy character or an emo for like 24 minutes an episode for the anime for five episodes straight.

wutah
wutahLv2wutah

there's no system in this? then how do you explain him learning all that haki stuff?was he just born with it? did he train for it like Luffy? it's kind of random to throw haki in there without explanation of how it came about. i think a system would solve this easily, also he can get stronger every time he kills an enemy.

Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4Reiya9

If he has to say observation to use it every time that’s just annoying

DaoistUKlG2H
DaoistUKlG2HLv1DaoistUKlG2H

Норм начало для таких сюжетов

Bra_d
Bra_dLv1Bra_d

Great chapter, but man i hope you didnt turn the pet into chakra if you could do that everyone would do it, thats just dumb no offence.

Dispersium
DispersiumLv4Dispersium

exp

Zachariah_Browning
Zachariah_BrowningLv4Zachariah_Browning

Get the zero tails. He should learn all of his family’s jutsu and u can make up some stronger and cooler one

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

Redfar
RedfarLv5Redfar

Je ne sais pas si vous êtes au courant mais l'observation haki est tout le temps actif, si on était dans un jeu on pourrait l'appeler une compétence passive si ca peut vous aider à mieux comprendre. Je vous dis ca car vous n'avez pas l'air de le savoir ; vers le début du chapitre le mc "active" l'observation haki, d'ailleurs vous lui faites dire à haute voix aussi, ce qui renforce mon idée que vous ne saviez pas comment marche l'observation haki. ( A noter que tout cela n'est en aucun cas un reproche. ) Je ne sais pas si quelqu'un vous l'a déjà fait remarquer dans un autre chapitre suivant mais comme je commence seulement l'histoire je ne parle donc que sur ce que j'ai déjà lu ;). Sachez que je vais continuer à lire un peu plus mais à noter que ce petit détail sur l'observation haki m'a quand même un peu "triggered". Sur ce, je m'en vais de ce pas continuer à lire :)

Jamahl_Shand
Jamahl_ShandLv1Jamahl_Shand

Artificial tailed beast huh... just get some massive chakra and mix it with nature energy ig and give a physical body and a soul

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Sau11
Sau11Lv14Sau11

thx for chapter

MistofOblivion
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Thanks for the chapter 💖

El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

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Cengep
CengepLv10Cengep

nice

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

implant a will into a mass of shaped(into any animal) raw chakra unclaimed by anyone