Coolnerd
1You could create an original jutsu that mimics the power of devouring some mythical wolves have and have his ninken use it on enemies to become stronger. 2 Have him join a summoning beast group that would teach his pup how to become a pseudo tailed beast while he learns sage mode. 3 You could have him raid a laboratory (Kama,Orochimaru,that leach using shippuden movie doctor from the land of sky) 4 Have Danzo illegally add some of ghe Kyuubi’s chakra to his ninken and have that make it a pseudo tailed beast
Ugh another lazy main character. I'm interested in reading this story, but lazy characters really just drag the story on they complain far too much for my liking. Nobody wants to read about Shikamaru as a main character. That's why the story is about the idiotic too much energy having Naruto, that's also why it's not about Sasuke, because nobody would truly like having these guys as main characters for the Long haul. They're cool for a small duration as side characters, but nobody wants to read or watch a lazy character or an emo for like 24 minutes an episode for the anime for five episodes straight.
there's no system in this? then how do you explain him learning all that haki stuff?was he just born with it? did he train for it like Luffy? it's kind of random to throw haki in there without explanation of how it came about. i think a system would solve this easily, also he can get stronger every time he kills an enemy.
Je ne sais pas si vous êtes au courant mais l'observation haki est tout le temps actif, si on était dans un jeu on pourrait l'appeler une compétence passive si ca peut vous aider à mieux comprendre. Je vous dis ca car vous n'avez pas l'air de le savoir ; vers le début du chapitre le mc "active" l'observation haki, d'ailleurs vous lui faites dire à haute voix aussi, ce qui renforce mon idée que vous ne saviez pas comment marche l'observation haki. ( A noter que tout cela n'est en aucun cas un reproche. ) Je ne sais pas si quelqu'un vous l'a déjà fait remarquer dans un autre chapitre suivant mais comme je commence seulement l'histoire je ne parle donc que sur ce que j'ai déjà lu ;). Sachez que je vais continuer à lire un peu plus mais à noter que ce petit détail sur l'observation haki m'a quand même un peu "triggered". Sur ce, je m'en vais de ce pas continuer à lire :)