Comments of chapter undefined of A Better Life In a better World

First: extremely short chapter. at least please make it into 1000 words per chapter. you could simply combine several chapters into one or smthng. second: things happen way too fast. although when I check your last chapter it gets much better. so i guess this is fine. third: please use more punctuation. The dot is already fine. but the comma is still lacking. sometimes the sentence has 2 meanings because you didn't put a comma. fourth: improve the flow of your sentence or whatever it is called. i am not talking about your vocabulary cause it is already great. what im talking about is the flow of each sentence being chained together into one concrete image. because, although the reader can understand what the paragraph is trying to say. it felt awkward reading it. it feels like i need to put considerable effort to identify whether this sentence belongs to this scene or whether we had moved to the next one. i really recommend reading the top novel. as that will give you a general idea on how to construct the sentences. And if you really want more people to read this novel. you had to solve the first problem. because even i only read it bcs i was curious how 160 chapters only get that many views and no review. im not trying to attack you. just giving you help. hope you won't misunderstand.