Rysangel
That poem is lame, let me share a good one. "Oh great sea, you are made of water. Oh horse, you have four legs. Oh beauty, you have large eyes and a mouth!" Written by my boy Fang Yuan.
Real poetry doesnât rely on showy foolishness. Example - Life is the music to which all things move, Birds soar itâs cresendo using flight to prove, Their swift wings, their blood pounding, Their voices raised in chorus, Through mountains, skies and trees resounding, They cry loud into the world for us, That life has many a song worth hearing, And simply listening grants you meaning, and true bearing.