Comments of chapter undefined of My Life as a Gamer Across the Multiverse(ENG)

Why did they separate from the others? It makes no sense... The stupidity in the story keeps piling up. The author should have at least a decent excuse for that... On another note, none of the characters have eaten anything so far. Nor have they even bothered to try and gather supplies. Are we to believe that they get the needed nutrients magically from the air?

The Grammer ruined this lemon

idk bro makes me kinda feel flagged, i or most mean don't want the mc to have children and that's for sure

I'm not sure if you made the greatest decision or mistake in writing. Don't the first lemons always mention the Mc's member size? Cummon everyone gotta know if our boy hung like a horse.

Noob. Improve more lol

Thanks for the chapter

It could have been better. The grammar definetly needs work.

why hasn't the author ever gone back and edit any of this

very artificial

so was she a virgin or not?

thanks for the chapter buddy

Very Good 9.0