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Comments of chapter undefined of The Alpha's Bride

The Alpha's Bride

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Jennifer_Williams_6082
Jennifer_Williams_6082Lv15Jennifer_Williams_6082

I love this story, just getting a little bored with all of the strategizing, keeping up with the different people, etc. I miss the simplicity of the story. I read to relax and get away from the real world. Reading about all of the plans that everyone has going on is tiring and not that enjoyable for me. Great writer! Just starting to slightly lose interest.

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Tot_2U
Tot_2UModeratorTot_2U

Grady & Varya don’t know about the time difference between the realms… they will be in th MGP for the long haul. 😜 I hope they grow to love pack life 😉

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Leslie_James_8105
Leslie_James_8105Lv15Leslie_James_8105

hearing that Zina told Stephanie about Talia's plans is kinda damming they now know where the guardians live interesting

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Millsy_87
Millsy_87Lv14Millsy_87

I believe the story flow is just enough, since stories cannot be all action all the time. You really need to have those idle moments like brainstorming and strategizing to complete the story in a smooth manner. Fighting dear Author 💪💪💪 Well done! 👏👏

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Sravanthi82
Sravanthi82Lv15Sravanthi82

Poor Zina I feel sorry for her but now she will learn to be more vigilant. I hope Varya and Grady will find a place in MIdnight Guardian Pack.

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Calista_007
Calista_007Lv15Calista_007

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

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Jumzy
JumzyLv6Jumzy

vi

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