Comments of chapter undefined of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Good goijg. And i can understand. Corruption sucks. And if i had the means, like a death note... corrupt people would know.... if yiu do evil. You die. Its the ONLY way to keep evil at bay. Find one, kill one. Find 1000, kill 1000. Its the only way for people to understamd that doing evil things can get you killed. Society will prosper and technological advancements would florish.

It really feel the these charecters have substance. They actualy feel and think like real people.

Wher is the new chapter???

mc is from to another omniverse, I do not think he can return to his old world it would be like overcoming the DC multiverse, omniverse created by the energy of presence, leaving the creation of Overmind and looking for his home among countless creations, the DC world is very large and contains various layers, each layer transcends the level below it, basically has to overcome things like concepts, energy, rules, logic and more just for the DC Multiverse!

You satisfied my curiosity of his previous life

Great chapter. Well done. Though I really have to wonder why he isnt considering the dragon balls at all? Find a way back to his Dragon Ball Universe. Use the dragon balls to wish for an item technologically or magically capable to sending him too and from his original human universe. Use the magic to find his original universe through some bs resonance of his soul or something to locate it. He may need a set of more powerful dragon balls. I highly doubt the ones on earth could pull it off and I have my doubts the namekian one could either. Which would mean the planet sized super ones. If he wishes he could also save his Saiyin parents as well. Maybe make any waifu he has Saiyins with a wish for those who are not of super powerful races or more so short lived ones. Throw in a wish that they have good talent and a good zen kai boost naturally? Maybe even specifically wishing they have the same talent as him or Goku? He could even bring his former human family over and make them Saiyins or some other benefits. Wishing them back to life by bringing their bodies to the Dragon ball universe and hoping it works. Assuming he arrived after they died naturally or not. If old age he can make their bodies young with a wish then revive them. If he is hesitant he can wish to speak with their souls first to see if they're willing to be revived. Plenty of possibilities. Hope he seeks out Bulma. In general shes a good ally, waifu or not.

thx for the chapter I love the action in this

Thxs for the chap

The only thing I find stupid with his other identity is that he really thinks he can hide from justice league?😅especialy Batman?🤮🤮

Honestly batman seems like a very good ally ro have, an inventor like bulma and a very rich man.

This is an amazing fic 1000/10 greate job I love it.

I really like how human you make the characters. It's much easier to like some of them by reading how you write.

I say you executed MC backstory quite well, as in 10/10 quite well. many and I mean MANY fanfiction or story writen by amateurs writers spend to much time talking/writing about the MC pointless backstory that the reader doesn't necessarily need to know. And after the flashback or whatsoever, the author never mention about it ever again. Which is why it's pointless. if there's one advice I would give to isekai/reincarnated novel is that skip the whole isekai procedures. we read too many story that started similar that it become stale. just like Skyrim prologue where player install mod that skip the tutorial/prologue. While the first few chapters of the story wasn't good nor great, I even skim some if not most of them. You write it well enough that it snowball into a great story.

Ouch that would mess anyone up.

....bruh love the whole back story but am I the only one that can't wait until Karen (AKA powergirl) gets introduced? Is that how the author's going to introduce Darkside? Will there be a version of Shallot in PowerGirls universe? Will Darkside even come for Kara? I see him now coming after Shallot instead tho..

Update?