Sorahana
Hello Sora, really loving your book and the immensely fascinating story with it's twists and turns. Sadly, some of the potential greatness is taken away by the grammar errors sometimes. It's by no way anywhere to the point where it takes massive fun out of the chapters, only little annoyances here and there. I've been thinking about asking since a while ago, but what do you think about getting a proof-reader/editor? I would volunteer, if you'd like