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MangeTxx
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Thanks for Chapter

asuraseagod
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Original issei's balance breaker was super lean and wimpy. Make his balance breaker bulky and high something like this in red color

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Ero_Tenshi
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Neia14th
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Will his body size look like giant yujiro or baki size?

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Ieatpotatos
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MightyOzy
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Maybe you can have draig do some ritual to give him a deagon magic core woth magic resistance. You can find samuels poison in the underworld and make yourself kmmune to magical poisons and have a weapon for trihexa, great red and ophis. Maybe learn a weapon and get a teacher that can reign in his battle instincts and teach him control iver his bloodlines. A god, maybe odin or Shiva. Humanity is about control and innovation, by these they are able to battle godly beings and seal things like pure energy. show the mc as more intelligent and planning for future events. The world is dark so what is isseis goal, just becoming a puppet for devils? -maybe making his own faction? -maybe conquering the mundane world? -maybe tryjng to usher peace? Give your mc a goal so you can write your story around that easily. Good luck and keep writing

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Absolute_Zer0
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Oh, Brilliant. But I hope he will learn to reign those instincts as story progressed.

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Ninjesus
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??

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Sleepywolff
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i love this already more please

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Afonso_Aaron
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Thanks for the chapter

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kartun_24
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plz don't quit man I love this fanfic there are too less good hanma fanfics

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WolfxofxDemons
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Get that adrenaline pumping!

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Braulio_Mendez
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Nice

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Ero_Tenshi
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Btw Wouldn't it be better to have the Flugel(no game no life) Bloodline instead of the Hero clan bloodline?

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Jesse_Delgado
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Amazing keep it up

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Dazet345
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Madre de isei un oni y el padre un descendiente de héroes para dar nacimiento y explicación de los poderes de isei

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B0R1NG
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amazing

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Fi3l
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Nice

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PALI_
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thanks for the chapter can't wait for more

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gilgamesh45
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amazing