Comments of chapter undefined of KNIGHT OF SONA SITRI ( DXD FANFIC)

The idea is really good, but the execution could be a lot better as well. There are a lot of spelling, grammar, and sentence structure problems, and all that could be solved using grammarly (free version works fine as well). But apart from all that, like I said, the idea is good, but a lot of refinement is available for this story.

Pretty good , hope there is more in the future, I don't think is necessary to bring all this chapters together. But I really like it