Comments of chapter undefined of Mo family's daughter-in-law

Mo family's daughter-in-law

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Chapter comments14

shishir_choudharyLv4shishir_choudhary

You have written the story with a well knitted plot. it's lovely

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Najad_SahariLv14Najad_Sahari

So far so good. Just make the story short and sweet. Don't prolonged and spinning plots unnecessarily. Focused on characters development. Some side stories are expected but don't spend too much on side stories that will make readers lose interest. Try to cap the chapters below 300.

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Nina_BuezoLv15Nina_Buezo

you're welcome! great story so far! thank you

2yr

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Sumita_KansalLv4Sumita_Kansal

good & some different ....like it

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SunsetsFavorLv15SunsetsFavor

you doing great 👍

2yr

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Kira_BradyLv15Kira_Brady

So far so good, but it’ got me hooked keep up the great work! 👍

2yr

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Agnes_TolentinoLv1Agnes_Tolentino

it's very nice story..i like it with comedy in it ,good☺️☺️👍👍♥️♥️

2yr

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Celina_VinahLv3Celina_Vinah

lovely, funny n interesting...💙💙💙

2yr

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Mi_ShellLv15Mi_Shell

I understand writing is difficult, I've commented simple corrections. I really like the story so far 👏😁 loving grandpa and butler Li 😂

2yr

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DeniseWilliams2993Lv15DeniseWilliams2993

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

2yr

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Maizatul_Zakaria_6812Lv4Maizatul_Zakaria_6812

AWESOME STORYLINE Keep up the good work. My recommendations are the same as the others in the COMMENTS.

2yr

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Virg_GatangiLv4Virg_Gatangi

u r doing great...

2yr

Hilaria_BinallaLv4Hilaria_Binalla

great job author i really like it i just wish that it wont drag too long i can only wait upto 300 chapters

2yr

Riza_2014Lv3Riza_2014

this is one of the great story ive read thank you ive enjoyed reading it

2yr