Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth of the third rate actress
Rebirth of the third rate actress
Bird_Of_Paradise
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only 2 chapters in so can't say too much about the plot yet. Some pretty standard backstory/plot, but the writing is decent. The dialogue feels a bit forced and amateurish, but--again--not bad! Just unpolished 😁 will continue as I am enjoying it currently! thanking the author for hard work tho!
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Totally understand and just hoped my own unprofessional opinion can help in a small way. I know how much hard work and love goes into making a story so I hope you can be genuinely proud of all that you do and keep plugging away!!!😁
Bird_Of_Paradise:Right i am amateur here😅😅Hope I did get better writing upto where I am and some real feedback after a long long long time😇😇thank you🤧I m glad
