Froschmann
Intresting
Acid trip?
Pretty good first chapter, also I like that fact that there was none of that "you died now you get wishes to become op" stuff that is so overused it's not even funny. There were some typos, but overall good grammar too which is always nice.
Pretty good first chapter, although i find it easier to understand a persons thoughts when they are in marks like ‘this’ just personal preference.
