Comments of chapter undefined of Rejected By The Alpha

The second sentence of the first paragraph seems like a run on sentence to me or it is missing alot of punctuation . My comment is in no way intended to be rude. When I was looking for someone to publish my books I knew I would require an editor . I'm not a great speller and still have no idea how to use a semicolon. Your story looks interesting but I was unable to continue after a few chapters because of the grammatical errors. The more stories I write, and the more I help my teenage daughter write, the better I become . The more you write the better you will become .😊

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