Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: Dragon King of The North

feel like I'm missing some backstory

wouldnt they be mistaken for wildlings?

You overdid your poetic-not so poetic discriptions in the earlier chap. Its ok if its just 3-5 paragraph, but it become really boring afterwards. You take 3/4 of the chapter just for discription. With really not many info being there except he is in a snow and has dogs.

why add the npcs

Why ancient Nord armor? I'd figure carved for the men and keep aela as ancient.

Pretty good. your english spelling and grammer is good. Please not to op its not as fun to read when they steam roll everyone. he can be strong more than most but not cant touch this level. overal its the first chapter so its good.

what kind of animals are the pets?

Solid work so far.

Couldn't you have made us at least 20-24

And our voice sounds like Anos VoldiGoad

Our haircut

Our Body build

Or Nordic Carved Armor

Nordic Armor

keep going little mortal,if you should stop then ill flay your skin right off or maybe RIGHT ON!! no no...im feeling very musical today little mortal so how about ripping out your guts and play them like a lute? no? How about cheese ?? YES !! CHEESE ! GREAT AND WONDERFUL CHEESE...SO DONT STOP LITTLE MORTAL. you are there for my entertainment after all.

Is this book dragonborn or the horribly nerfed one from the game