Yvette_Celia
Vreau să sper că nu otrăvește pe cineva fără să-i fi făcut nimic ..
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Nice Opening
nice opening 👍👍
Good opening, my only gripes are some grammatical weaknesses, what I would recommend is to download the Grammarly extension to your chrome browser, it will help you achieve a cleaner text and do your story justice.[img=recommend]
Ooh it was interesting how we get to find out about Olivia's mission since the beginning.
a very good start
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great start
Nu îmi plai poveștile cu criminalii că personaje principale,pentru mine Olivia e o criminală..
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I just love it!! Can’t wait for more😍
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