Comments of chapter undefined of Hero of Darkness
Hero of Darkness
CrimsonWolfAuthor
Chapter comments6
Man, i get it, there are times when to make things very serious or make it sound climactic but I’ve been noticing alot that there are just too many repetitions of the same thought just penned down differently. I basically have been reading half the chapter length each day just by skipping the repeated parts. I am not hating on the author, but just tone down the repetition a bit.
honestly, the fight that you described with the hero of fire was much better. you can feel the emotions that you wrote but you changed the way how you express. well I hate those stupid readers, bec of them you changed your way of writing. I still like it however you write author, it's just that that was much better till hero of fire after that it feels so rushed. well author, you know what they say you can't please everyone. I still wish you the best of luck. bec this novel is the bestest in the whole world.
CrimsonWolfAuthor:Believe me, plenty of people (in a possible scenario, you yourself) will be complaining about how things didn't feel serious or stakes were not high at all if I don't write and mention those details. This is something readers often tell me that the story has no depth mainly because I don't often stress upon the direness of the situation like many other novels where just one emotion and objective is expressed in roundabout ways in a single chapter. If I don't mention what's happening behind the scenes, then you will also don't care about the situation and forget everything the next minute. This is something that can't be helped as I will be blamed for creating plotholes and lackluster story later.
