Comments of chapter undefined of Hero of Darkness
Hero of Darkness
CrimsonWolfAuthor
Chapter comments38
Wow....this is brilliant. Author, I love how you work so hard in characters, specially generals. Also, this is my first novel when I 've paid, but I will try to continue supporting you with what I can. Stick with what you had planned. Really, you are a great author, writer and your novel is worth a lot. Being a newbie follower my word doesn't mean much but I'll keep reading you for the good and the bad. Love you[img=recommend]
Didn't feel it was drawn out at all due to the fast upload speeds. 2-3 ch a day is crazy fast. Compared to what a lot of other people do .5-1ch a day. So you you can afford to draw out an arc twice as long without people losing interest. And other more experienced and intelligent side characters is a must imo gives the novel realism, a sense of urgency/danger and a chance for character growth. At first when he got his divine abilities I thought he would be abusing him constantly to get super OP super fast which would be boring af. Instead you put actual challenges and conditions for him to reach his goals instead of breaking all the rules. So well done so far Crimson.
Honestly l great job man, the only novel that i actually paid to read, an amazing work hope you don’t lose the motivation to write it, i feel like people over-exaggerate when saying a FL is nescessary, or that the references are annoying but I don’t care im here to enjoy the story and i know it’s gonna be a good ride but also a long one.
I love your book, Crimson it's refreshing to see other characters not be brain dead and are actually smart . also I personally find it fine if you take your time to write more chapters. yea I want to read more but you shouldn't suffer because of it. sadly not everyone can say that :( anyways keep up the good work man I'll try my best to support you :)
I think the next arc is make or break. Mc should be able to kill a bunch of monsters and upgrade his combat skills. He can also become an alchemy master, etc for life skills. But the problem is pacing. pacing needs to be 100% faster. If an arc takes 150 chapters. Than the author should get it done in 70 or 50.
Love your hard work author, I'm a newbie trying to be an author, I have many ideas and great imagination to write my own story but to actually write what is in my mind is a a very very difficult task for me, so I understand how difficult it is to become an author . And seeing u guys write 2-3 chapters daily is like looking at 7th stage saints (lol)
took me a week to get here almost... maybe it was only 2 or 3 days..... or 5? idk but I got here far quicker then I should. now begs the question... do I start arc 3? and buy privlage to keep up to date and hit my head when a chapter ends on a clif or do I stockpile content..... but if I stockpile it dosnt show my support, and if I read it all I would have nothing to read at times....
Dude to me you are seriously a great author.I love your work and can't wait for your future works. But i still want to say i am not a fan of romance in novels and is one of the reasons i really like your novel.I just hope that if do you include romance element with khan in future i hope you don't let it dominate the whole journey of Kahn's life that i am awaiting to see in the future. Can't wait to see your future work.Love from India.
I think that you are perfect right now. You put so much détails for us in the background to make it extremely realistic and that's is something that none other novels have and is something essential. Also Khan is not a OP Mc and his opponents are not stupids like you say. There are living , they have they own plans in parallel so we can understand them better Just to say good job and be what you desire!👍
