Comments of chapter undefined of Grimoire: Breath of Life

The setting is good and the writing seems well done. The slow pace is just making me lose interest quickly. He is poor and the slums suck and he pickpockets folks. The amount of reasons he could get beat and end up in that cave are numerous, but none will be surprising. I guess it feels like I’m waiting for something to happen that I already know will happen so its more boring than suspenseful.