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Comments of chapter undefined of The Dark Lord Rises

Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

Avengers jumped to another timeline? I though they took the stones to specifically alter their own timeline instead off killing off thanos in the past etc. To avoid the splitting of timelines, also would the stones even work in another timeline considering that they are useless in alternate universes?

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Metalloid
MetalloidLv5Metalloid

I really like your story and love that you take time to build the world but this chapter felt a bit too much of history dump without it really adding anything to the story. Besides that i really love your work so thank you for the chapters!

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

So when is he going to actually do something he claimed to want to do instead of spamming history summaries? I mean, I like the premises but he just keeps yammering on and on about things he should do without actually doing anything yet.

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LordValmar
LordValmarLv4LordValmar

The double copy/paste history overview was pretty cringe. I mean sure I just skipped all of it but still... Would had been better if he clarified events to Europe the first time he made the inquiry to spare the reader. Or better yet, only show us the specific events he has decided on possibly taking advantage of rather than the entire list. Seriously nothing really happens in this chapter other than a brief letter telling us stuff most readers should already know about time travel and then double-wall history.

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the_fat_taoist
the_fat_taoistLv14the_fat_taoist

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

Morgana need to be Bent over