darran_
a little issue with the grammar, such as constantly switching between present and past tense when using the characters pov. A few unnecessary words here and there as well, but otherwise it's fine. Decent idea, possible scenario, not entirely random... but still needs a bit of work. other than that it's pretty decent.
the issue currently with just these chapters are that you just gave the mc the ability to perfectly utilize his four legs. which he only had two of origannly, and btw did u know that chameleons dont have remotely the same type of eyesight as humans.Hes adjusting to quickly, like you can say instinct, but that only works for animals without much intelligence.