Comments of chapter undefined of Warlock of War: My Ares System

Ah yes, of course. Author her character feels forced. They just interacted one time and the second time they meet they’re eating together and now they’re friends?? You said she’ll be important later on but that’s exacty why you have to handle her first apparitions, look i’m not a pro author or even a startinf author but i know that a forced character being important isn’t enjoyable to read. No offence these are just my thoughts.

I haven't felt such disappointment for a long time

This is probably the chaoters that im most disappointed on

Wow just wow what a waste of time and resources the MC almost died getting all that even the penalty for failing was death nd this is what we end up with...what waste

thank you for the chapter, but what a waste of a lot of time.

Man I don’t think I’ve ever been more disappointed, like my dude spent so much effort trying to get those eyes just for them to go to aisa. I can’t speaking this being forced or no but I can say that this is a giant waste of time, the “reward” wasn’t equal to the effort Orion put into getting those ingredients And another thing y was she in the room couldn’t she have waited outside or something?

Thx!

Thanks for the chapter.