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Comments of chapter undefined of Shrewd wife of Lin brothers

No_Face_001
No_Face_001Lv12No_Face_001

keep it up, we're here waiting for the next chapter [img=recommend]

BlackLotuz_
BlackLotuz_Lv15BlackLotuz_

Dont worry its not boring please keep it comin And get well soon.g

dskyla
dskylaLv15dskyla

I don’ think the book became boring. The story is progressing into a good development while you emphasize on each brother’s story and adventure and pasts. Keep up the great work.

moondark
moondarkLv15moondark

Your book has not gotten boring! Actually I sometimes get worn out reading stories that have too much drama every single chapter. If you pay attention, a normal book has slow periods in it with spurts of excitement. That’s so the reader doesn’t feel like they are on a roller coaster the whole time. I’ve noticed with serialized books where we only read a chapter at at time, the trend is to have excitement every chapter. I guess to keep the audience interested. But I don’t think that makes for a very good story. It’s too all over the place. You have a story in mind and it naturally progresses with calm times and exciting times. And that’s totally normal. Your story is more a slice of life anyways. The characters aren’t on a grand quest after all. I’m reading it to see how their lives progress and how the relationships in a reverse harem will work out and to have a happy ending.

Casikas
CasikasLv12Casikas

The story is not becoming boring, I guess compared with the beginning that was packed with family drama and those spicy scenes, now the story is more focused on the characters development and back story, so it is indeed necessary. I even feel the story has gotten funnier with the addition of the two uncles.

Ryu_2020
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No_Face_001
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irsgen
irsgenLv15irsgen

I agree with that that is always exciting it's always one thing after the other but back to the story gangster yu will flush out the rat.

dskyla
dskylaLv15dskyla

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule