fairytail72
I do get what you are trying to do with his character , but still I don't like it . Even though they are married and she wouldn't mind , doing such things without the others consent is illegal . Even though the story is of far back , being a twenty first century's citizen it makes me uncomfortable ... should have taken ur warning more seriously ...
Seriously, don't change a thing. I forgave you for the cold shower caused by the "cliffhanger." 😭 But darn it, it takes a beautiful and dirty mind to write like you do. Please be yourself. Within reason, I don't want us all to get kicked off of Web*****. I just realized you are also an ESP, evil sexy, perfect like your boy. 🐯