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Comments of chapter undefined of Shrewd wife of Lin brothers

Muse_
Muse_Lv3Muse_

I do get what you are trying to do with his character , but still I don't like it . Even though they are married and she wouldn't mind , doing such things without the others consent is illegal . Even though the story is of far back , being a twenty first century's citizen it makes me uncomfortable ... should have taken ur warning more seriously ...

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Nerd_Next_Door
Nerd_Next_DoorLv15Nerd_Next_Door

for the first time I actually feel sorry for her 🤭 look at my baby Lin Yu limping away like the boss he is 😜

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fattynomore
fattynomoreLv15fattynomore

I just love it i cant wait until they all In one bed 🤤 Please keep going.

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Aelaran
AelaranLv15Aelaran

Nooo I like it!! darker please!

Moon_Raven
Moon_RavenLv14Moon_Raven

Seriously, don't change a thing. I forgave you for the cold shower caused by the "cliffhanger." 😭 But darn it, it takes a beautiful and dirty mind to write like you do. Please be yourself. Within reason, I don't want us all to get kicked off of Web*****. I just realized you are also an ESP, evil sexy, perfect like your boy. 🐯

Ralisha_Bhikraj
Ralisha_BhikrajLv14Ralisha_Bhikraj

i hate the fact that he took advantage of her and then made her feel like it was her fault... ah yu is too manipulative for my taste...

DaoistHubq6O
DaoistHubq6OLv13DaoistHubq6O

I really enjoyed this please keep it I like the dark side😘😘😘😘😘😇😇😇😇

B_Poppet
B_PoppetLv14B_Poppet

I think this is fine. Hopefully you don’t get too into the dark side tho 😂 manipulation is the one thing I hate the most in stories, gender doesn’t matter.😬

Lalawnchee
LalawncheeLv15Lalawnchee

Nope, your good author. Just the right amount of spice.

Amber_M1
Amber_M1Lv14Amber_M1

This story keeps getting better and better!!

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the_lady_doth_NGAF
the_lady_doth_NGAFLv15the_lady_doth_NGAF

I wonder if these brothers are willing to share their time with wifey and each other in the future....

E_Bertrand
E_BertrandLv15E_Bertrand

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Jv_GAS
Jv_GASLv15Jv_GAS

when will she become 18??

irsgen
irsgenLv15irsgen

linyu he's a bad man she better watch out for him

Onibeju_Eniola
Onibeju_EniolaLv4Onibeju_Eniola

I like it

Nalle_CHG
Nalle_CHGLv15Nalle_CHG

Más oscuro por favor 🔥🔥🔥

meimimi
meimimiLv15meimimi

NIc….

Moon_Raven
Moon_RavenLv14Moon_Raven

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Ninia_O
Ninia_OLv15Ninia_O

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LaJan
LaJanLv15LaJan

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola