Mm. At least you know some things are unrealistic. Actually, some things are more highly unlikely rather than unrealistic, in which case I will read with ease.
I love the MC just the way you make her author san! she is so kind and intelligent,as well as feisty!
may she succeed in all her endeavors,as well as you!
I love this chapter I like the fact that Sue won't be cheated and she managed to get the drop on the bad guys I think she'll love all her husband's and eventually she'll win them all over I like to keep reading