Comments of chapter undefined of The Ruined Death Knight

the switching of "I" and "He" was confusing.

Really, you should try to either only keep one viewpoint or use at least a method to differentiate between these two narration methods. (try to see what other authors use or maybe use brackets for his inner thoughts?)

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Great start!

I kind of wanna see our Mc make a new race of a Lich and a Death knight mixed, wouldn't that be overpowered and terrifying.

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ugh... system again... hopefully itdoesnt show up as much. only way i can enjoy a system novel is if it barely mentions the system part that'd be great

Dead. System novel..

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If he experienced an emotion he wasn’t emotionless.

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Nice intro chap, just a little bit confused with the POV, stick with one POV maybe...

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Thx for chap

Would have made more sense if it had been a crazy cult instead of terrorists, a cult could have had some dumb reason for doing what they did but a terrorist group would never have slowly killed random people like that and instead would have focused on killing allot of people to make a statement.

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