Comments of chapter undefined of A Lewd Story

interesting development we have here. now our boy learning. now it time to hunt them sexy witches. good or bad one he gonna make them his. >:3 make them his slave ot perhaps have his was break them to the point the only one who can satisfy them is him. I'm looking forward to see how our boy Jack gonna handle them.

That book was written by a cultured man.

Thanks for the chapter😁, continue this great novel.👍👍

Thanks for the chappy

Well buddy I'll say story is losing its shine from past few chap he got isekaied okay have op powers check but what about getting stronger and the purpose of being stronger then any other person for now he have a normal life and he don't need to change it's not like he became the strongest just to get a harem no,great power comes with great responsibility but what responsibility he had nothing Reason you can give for working har - town destroyed by people who they think are good (people of empire or king for his own benefits) and they put balme on mc and branded him as a Demon or guy with evil powers, mc father, uncle died protecting his mother and relatives so when he realize that people who think are good but betrayed him this will give him a development and he will realize his goal that is to destroy and make suffer to those who framed him he will expose the conspiracy and break the empire No offense buddy i write what i truly think if you like my idea plzz give it a try and any modification that can make story more better plzz do Thx for the chap

Granting a Alpha male skill Gives u a lot of confidence hahahaha this is the best power But I don't wanna mc be a simp I like to Pride women be under his crotch hahaha . sorry for my dirty mind but the author says mind is a creation of god so I'm not dirty mind Author!!!!!!!! Knowledge Is the before the skill!!!!

I thought you were announcing your new book

I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author

thanks for the chapter.

Thk Author I hope you are well :)

Great chapter Thx keep it going.

Будет ли продолжение? Мне конечно не нравилось понятие святой миссии, как цели, но сам роман, все же сильно нравится, и крайняя глава вышла давно, но мне хотелось бы увидеть продолжение, или приемлемое окончание

kinda figured this story won't actually continue. just another author that gave up

ty author I have enjoyed this story thus far. I found your story a couple days ago and have already read through to this cliff hanger of seeing it has not updated in 29 days.... I hope your not feeling discouraged as I believe you do have great talent in writing. yes there may be what you feel are mistakes that happens in all endeavors its part of the further molding of you as an author. Also do not let others dictate that what you wrote was bad or not up to some imagined bar of quality,if you are expresses the thoughts and ideals then your doing right as writer. now im not saying ignore when your feeling trepidations while writing but take those as signs leading you to change or flesh out a detail, its a road sign advising you of a turn ahead not a sign saying dead end. well again ty very much for your story Mr author and I hope it continues soon. p.s. your use of lonely a few chapters back was off. the proper term to use to say he isn't the only one of his kind would be alone. you feel lonely when your alone with no one else around. I hope that helps some.

What a great chapter

well well checking every day if there is a new chapter,author we all know you are a nice guy but pls dont make promise you cant keep =( i gonna check the novel in a half year more and see if there are some new chapter since i love the novel i will not forget what happend last :D

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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