NephilimAuthor
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i don't know how it was before you edited it but now it's a pretty good first chapter !
Thanks. I fixed some grammar, rewrote it so it flows better etc. If there's a need and people actually pay to read this, I'll have another go at it and do a big rewrite, but for now that's a maybe.
Interesting start. I Want more modern cultivation anyway so this is good for now
Cool concept
the chapter is well written and the story seems interesting :)
Thanks for the chap
thanks for the chapter đ
