It says theres 2 more chapters to read but it keeps saying error and says i need to get privilege and that the author is getting his stock ready. so weird
it hurts so much watching the unreadable chapters grow đ
@Raj, i can manage the pain while you take your time to fix it. just know it stems from being addicted to your story đ
I donât really like the fact that the mc is dense as a block it kinda puts me off. You have built ur character as a mature powerful leader then for him to not know his mate has obviously been fĂ»cked is annoying. Everything else is fine tho
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I really dont like how dense you are making the MC. Especially when you try to port him as some mature and intelligent guy.
But then suddenly he has so social awareness of females, that they may be attracted to him or even that his friend got laid. Really throws things off.