Raj_Shah_7152
Too much story progression too quickly will make it difficult to sustain the story long term... Balance is always good... Also, more depth like taking 4 chapters for a dungeon also helps increase immersion in the story as readers get more involved into the details... so I think the story has been good. keep the pace.
my man still looking through past comments even though they are past 300 chapters. respect. 👏🗿 hoping there is more elaborating on things in future chapters like i wish it showed some of the answers given by the rejects/passers when raj did the recruitment just cause i know some coulda been funny "what brings you to True Elites?"
I'm not saying this to be rude but, there isn't a few comas where there should be and there is a miniature mistake in one of the said with a seven behind it. Just trying to help it get easier to read for the next reader sorry if it is any offence but other than that this is a great Novel and I look forward to more of your works