Comments of chapter undefined of The Tribrid System
The Tribrid System
CollinX_BrainZ
Chapter comments4
I see numerous errors. Infact you, author, have even acknowledged these errors. Yet you simply say, "I do not check on previous chapters". Now i ask, Why? Is it to much work to go back and fix your mistakes? is it to much to give an explanation for the questionable changes? Then after disrespecting the readers you have by; ignoring, silencing, and even making sorry excuses for your ineptitude, you have the audacity to ask why there are so many complaints? No, you do not have the right. You are a decent writer plot wise, but its the details that draw and keep readers engaged. Yet it appears you have a sever lack of talent when it comes to these details. Furthermore, acknowledging your errors was a good move, however, you did not correct these errors. There are numerous spelling errors, these are acceptable. What is not acceptable are the errors in the "system". In a novel such as this there is nothing that will drive readers away more than a poorly written system. on a final note I would like to say you have promise as a writer but, you come across as very "stuck up", I will most likely be dropping this novel. I look forward to your improvements, so please do not disappoint me.
