Comments of chapter undefined of I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.

The starts are great, but the long paragraph making it feels boring, (it's so tiring to the eyes...fr)... cutting it could make it more better...

I hope this book cheers me up. I usually don’t read romance books but I saw the reviews state that this book is good for a depressed teenager, so here I am.

Wow, This is a great ❤❤

I loved the quote and the meaning behind it. But, I felt like it was taking you too long to introduce the story and yet when you did, I was amazed by your talent with dialogue. The only thing I recommend is to read your dialogue out to yourself and try to make it feel more natural.

Narration was awesome ! loved it !!

😮 wow keep it up! It was so nice to read with fluent narrations!

Decent, it was funny. Sometimes you were a tad descriptive but it kinda is forgivable too.

Great first chapter ❤

I really enjoyed this one.

Good. Keep it up.

Wow... I have nothing else to say.... I'm amazed! This is awesome!

interesting chapters! well-detailed.

Insane

This is a promising one, yes

Personally, I think currently you need to work on getting your paras shortened. The information is a pile of a mess even for people with writing styles similar to ours. You should start by slowing down the continuous stream of thoughts as people usually prefer precise chapters.

very interesting way you opened with the first chapter, then went on to explain the MC and his life.

So far the description and the first person usage of the author is fine especially of how he describes the environment. As for the main character, Miles he is fine and I kinda like it has a sarcastic teenager personality. I believe in next chapter will have another exciting things happen

your jabs are painful aigoooo I can relate hahaha! I like this already mwehee

It's a really good introduction and I feel like I could relate with Reyes.[img=update][img=recommend]