Comments of chapter undefined of An Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint

Darwin111111:Eh... this is translated from Spanish. I don't know English XD. The problem isn't really changing views. I think it's that you just don't conclude something and you don't determine anything. Example: if I remember correctly, the first guy that appears is a soldier. That's great, everything is going well, it seems that the guy is the protagonist, but just at the moment he is going to do something you change the focus to another person. I thought it was like some kind of flash back or a scene where a person the soldier knows remembers the soldier and is worried to discover that it happens to everyone. But, in reality, that point of view was to show something that we do not understand. It's not bad that you did it, but the problem is that it is very fast. You changed suddenly and started showing much more than expected. When we all thought that actually some girl was the protagonist, you changed again XD. And that's annoying, because you don't conclude much either. It is not known what the girl or the soldier will plan at least.