Comments of chapter undefined of An Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint
An Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint
EnderGolem997
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Hello. Is this a good or bad thing? Comments are pretty rare these days, and I would like to know your opinions on the switching viewpoints. I made a note about them, but I'd love to understand my shortcomings further. Also, if anyone else reads this comment in the future, please keep in mind, this fanfiction is the equivalent of me bashing my head against a brick wall, and painting an art piece with the blood splatter
Darwin111111:I think all of us who read your story do, but even there points of view don't change that much. It focuses on the protagonist and switches to another character to explain something. But even when it changes to another character, or quickly returns to the protagonist, or at least it lasts long enough for it to feel good and not something like... example, how each member of your family leaves your house from the moment they wake up until they meet in the car.
So, after a long tine, I think I should address this issue. Before I was moderately competent at writing, I wrote this prologue. As one reader has pointed out, the viewpoints change very often, making it confusing. I decided to leave a comment here to help you guys figure out which viewpoints are which. The first one is Ethan and the last one is Ethan. The one's in-between - I don't think I have to delve into explanation
