Comments of chapter undefined of Marvelous Grandmaster

Man your story is very good and has a lot of potential from what I've read so far, congratulations! I just think you're exaggerating the "insults" during the fight or before it, it kind of childishes the situation, at least in my opinion, but apart from that so far it's very good.

I'm totally in favor of Mikael, to use Dark side bio-manipulation to steal An Saba Nur's Mutant gene/powers, it would serve as a nice little strength boost after a semi-hard boss fight in the scheme of things.

let him absorb all apocalyspe powers muhaahahahahahahah

Good dude. Good intentions, Poor execution

Apocalypse will never be the MC equal sense he is the embodiment of the force even if Apocalypse was at full power

Noice

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

AWESOME thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

The "insults we're kind of cringe

It was a great ch please keep going

Great chapter.

Thanks

scott is getting cucked lol his one sided crush on jean aint happening

thx🙏

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

M O A R!

Thank you for the chapter