SmallFries
So... they're randomly achived teleportation with no hint of it before this point. Honestly, it sort of feels like the premise of the story is sort of... vague. He was suppose to be getting powers from alternate selves. Instead he's Megamaning his powers sometime off of monster. Ok, that's fine. One set is from wizard self, who learns magic (we'll call him Wizard Jeff), one copies Monster abilities (we'll call him Blue Mage Jeff). But then he just randomly gets extra abilities sometime for being around something intereting. So instead of having a strong theme, Blue-Mage Jeff is just Random Jeff. This story also really just needs to be tightened up, in some ways (it's a bit all over the place), and not jump around to much in others (it jumps from plot point to plot point rather then developing a given point).