I'm not going to lie... I really liked the original start the first time around. However, I feel that this new beginning and storyline have pretty great potential! You never disappoint! I am very excited and can't wait for more! š¤š¤š¤
The first draft was really good! This one sounds really bOring ans like something that has been done before! please go back to the original plot, that is something thAt i wOuld like to read!