Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Boy Who Lived

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

get well soon.. all my stone for ur healthy for this all week.. eat a lot..

I feel like the chapter in itself is fine, if it could use a bit of clean up on the grammar. Although I feel as if it’s very out of character for Harry to call Dumbledore “grandpa”. We know he sees him as such and although there might have been an occasion or two in which he referred to him as such, It’s few and far between.