Comments of chapter undefined of I Became A Super Soldier Through The System

The story is entertaining, but a tip ... it is not necessary to give so many redundant explanations, to clarify something .... Half of this chapter could be summarized in: "My statistics are below a" normal person ", and On this site where authentic physical elites are trained, I will be in trouble but I do not improve. " I do not criticize your style but you have 2 problems: a) One is tired to read several paragraphs recalping what is clear in the 1st. B) When your readers have to pay stones for your texts, they complain that you put stuffing for craft, even if it is false ....